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Battle Of Heartbreak

The pain is like an animal, gnawing at my heart.
My heart beats wildly for you , my scars burst apart.
Can't keep me in the darkness like this. . .
Because your love is light, but ignorance is bliss.
I loved you more, than you'll ever know,
Part of me died, when you let me go.
Heartbreak surges through the cracks of the wall,
Splashes envy in my veins, brims my eyes, then falls.
The blade interrupts my feverish thoughts,
I've lost the battle, but heartbreak well fought.

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  • emma7386
    November 16
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    again this is perfect, the only thing that i might change is 'darkness' to 'dark' , thank you for sharing