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Dreaming of Utopia

The guns are silenced, melted down
or rusted lying on the ground.
More research on obscure disease,
backward nations put at ease.
Every village has fresh water,
no longer need to send their daughters
to crocodile infested pools
now they can trip happily to school.
No more Airforce, navy, army
their enormous budget spends quite barmy.
Money for old peoples homes
no one needs to die alone.
No more mud huts, draughty, smelling,
factories churn out standard dwellings.
Recreational drugs are banned
it was getting out of hand.
Gold and metals lost their worth
value now, productive earth.
Rice and wheat are staple measures
more valuable than buried treasure.

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  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    November 18
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    Very creative and great thoughts for this prompt!
    I am so glad that you entered this contest and I
    appreciate your entry. Take care and good luck to you!




    Jeremy0826

  • Coldwater
    November 7
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    Nicely done, it's an "if only" vision, we can but hope.
    Regards.


  • blueyez
    November 7
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    The future of the world... you flow wonderfully!