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Cursed to Bleed

The chain's wrapped tight in her hands
cutting into her palm till she bleeds
the tears she cries are a deep red
because her heart it bleeds.

She pulls the chain tighter as she begins to think
using the pain to cut off all thought
of the past that haunts her so
a man that she works hard to forget.

The blood from the chain in her palm
drips slowly to the ground
the flowers quickly soak it up
her pain absored without remorse
and she quickly realizes
that her pain is of he own.

No one will come to her aid
she'll face this alone till the end
and so the chain shifts hands
pulled tight again till it cuts skin.

But pulled away from her it is
and wrapped around her neck
the chains pulled tight till bleeds she does
and on the the ground she lies.

The figure having relinquished her pain
runs away with that necklace in hand
though he thinks it a prize
it's just a cursed jewel
upon which only brings pain and doom.

Now in new hands the cycle starts again
the chain drawn tight and blood begins to drip
until once more the one it holds is dead
and it continues from hand to hand.

Author notes

A) http://i594.photobucket.com/albums/tt22/mkay1197/pain.jpg


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  • Fallen-Thumper
    November 8

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    Brilliant! I really love this piece and its being added to the finalist, amazing and a really great job! Just fantastic, i love it. Good luck and thanks for entering!
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