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Sadness

Life is full of little quirks

things that hurt you so,

twisted with its hurts,

terrible ways to go.

 

Friendships come, friendships go,

these things cause sadness,

no longer wanted,

no longer cared for.

 

Come back and see me now,

don't you understand?

I am a lonely soul

with no one to hold my hand.

 

Sadness holds me in its grip,

as you walk away,

losing that which was important

takes me in its grip today.

 

You told me you would be there

when I needed a friend,

walking away from me

has hurt me like no other can.

 

Sorry I have disappointed you,

sorry I wasn't good enough,

now I am again alone,

trying to act all tough.

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  • Denise 28
    November 16
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    Bravo

    Your pain is heartfelt and espressed well here. As you have I to have been burned by love. There is no quick fix other then feel it and use it to make you stronger. I really like this line ...Now I am again alone tryig to act all tough...Even for yourself you have to be the strong one. Yet I know that one better then I can say.


  • Silent Cougar Moderators member
    November 7

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    Glad this was a contest entry,,,
    Cause you know there are always those, who although silent in moments needed, when the call is heard, the answers, the hands, the warmth will always be given, without question.
    Now smile, cheer up, because we 'are' here, some true ones never forget, especially when it is felt and needed.



  • lesbian-in-love
    November 6

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    THis was very interesting to read. The background is pretty neat too. I enjoyed reading this. Thanks so much for entering and best of luck. You are going on to round 3.