It's another sharp day when all my energy is amplified
and even the blink of an eye is supercharged
and even a laugh becomes a roar of cheers
and electric electric eccentric little jolts
like to shoot down this hyperactive spine
as it dances in the middle of the room
doing zip-zag spins and twining twists
and I wonder where the extra spark came from
or is it just a gift given yet again
simply because it's another day and I'm alive.
Author notes
11-06-09.
Title Prompt #9. Picked it because I'm really upbeat today and because it reminded me of "Bouncing Off the Walls" by Sugarcult, which has been stuck in my head all day.
Short, yes, but I wanted to vent the hyper. This is an awesome day for me. ^__^ But that's besides the point. What do you think of the poem itself?
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wow
stars in the yonder in the farawy land of god.....send frequencies..down here and all over......they are in magnetic and other waves..astrology tell ya that...guess you got that extra verve from there.....many do get...loved this rousing poem -
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