The setting , a bar, The blond on the make.
And the legs of an Angel. My manhood at stake.
The only transgression , that I am a loon.
Not in tune with the ladies. Unable to croon..
Yet a circle of idiots have caught her eye.
Lips plump and delicious, she seeks out her prize.
She joins in the chatter. Shows them some leg.
Whispers sweet nothings. all now her slave.
There's no conversation. Nothing of sense.
Just lust and emotion. Love so misspent.
She'll bed one or two. Or maybe them all.
This circle of idiots, with small heads now tall.
By H rap Fox
Please tell me what you think
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Damn good write Bob and so true. I've been there a time or two outside the circle.
Happy trails.
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Wouldn't let me give you applause before. hehehe
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LMAO I enjoyed this a lot. You took the words outa some woman's mouth
Sharon -
Glad I saw that trap for what it was. They are few and far between, but there are some men & women who've figured out where it's at - and though the bedroom is part of it, there is so much more to be appreciated and enjoyed with the right soul by your side.
You most certainly have a way with your words Mr. Fox - keep using them so very, very well!
& Blessings,
~ Jan ~
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Hysterical!
Did you mean croon in 1st stanza? anyway - a very fun read. Thanks.
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The circles are egos
all need to be fed
so starved for attention
they go where they're led
A fun read, tongue-in-cheek yet also a slice of society at work. well done!
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LOL This is so true. As a former bartender I can tell you it happens on a regular basis. You're better off just watching.
A very nice little ditty. I need to read more of your works. You are very diversified.
Sharon
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Oh yeah... As a former bartender/bouncer and "barfly", I've seen this situation so many times in my life... I like how you well describe that even though she may not be the best to "bed" or "woo", that male part of the brain also "yearns" to be the one chosen and/or to beat her at her own "game"... Short, sweet, well done, and funnier than hell because it's so true to life, Poet.... Thanks for sharing!!!
Peace,
Russell
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This is good.
The way the poem is structured and how it flows is brilliant. I like this style comrade.
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Lmao Bob, this is so funny. Were you really sitting watching this? It really sounds as if you are! Very funny
Cherry
xxx
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she sounds pretty easy bob...perhaps your in with a chance..good luck
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What a HOOT!
Now I gotta dye my hair...may as well change my name to Irene while I'm at it,lol
I love your wacky mind more and more...
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too funny and too true to life...such a shame. I loved the poem!
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your dreams dear one ..for most shun from them all.. who would think men are all.. most stink from a diseased mind ...all men want is a good lay.. dont give a crapola to love and stay as long as they get their pray...and bed as many as they can along the way...then the knife in the back and on to greener Pasteur's..
so much for humor and society LOL you are a gem of a cartoonest in times ...Hugs always hun Angel♥
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I've just said that
oh yes I did 
How true from the voice of a man of wisdom
Sad thoughts as the honestly really hits home
best wishes Bob
Julie
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AN ALL TO OFTEN SCENE
I have been where I could watch this and actually had the moves made on me but do not fall for them. Those are the ones who will stick you in your back as soon as it is turned.
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