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mother bird

mother bird will wait
until she knows time is right
to push out of nest

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  • Swan song gold member
    November 7
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    lol nicely done


  • Tqop
    November 6

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    That is profound and very true. I love the picture and I think of how birds fly and how they never push their little ones unless they are ready. Great job on the haiku.