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will it really all be ok?

she lies to me,
saying it will all be OK.
she tries to trick me,
make me believe;
she was right all along.
i was always wrong.
when i was lost,
she found me.
when i was broken,
she fixed me.
when i was done,
she gave me a life.
but what about when i die?...
will it all be OK then?
will that be her lie?

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