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i am alone

i love when she laughs,
love when she smiles.
when she is happy,
she takes a break.
lets me taste something.
lets me feel.
but if she sees
that i have eaten too much.
she'll beat me,
hate me,
starve me,
work me to the bone.
i am lost
i am alone.

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