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This Is Us


this is it, this is now
you and me
here...

this is us,
away and close amidst everyone else
our world undedected
undetested

setbacks:
nothing compared to our time together
it'll all blow over soon
i can wait for you
forever, if needed

this is the world,
these are it's people
we can understand their joy
their suffering
and smile
it's okay

alright for us, for all, forever
because now,
just you and me,
this is it...

with your touch,
your smile,
your voice,
your love,
my world is connected
is whole




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it's kind of an awkward flow

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  • humblpye gold member
    November 11

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    Lovely constructed and worded poem Kass...yes, this is you...! so balanced, so accepting, so at peace with the world...reaching into a higher dimension, growing, learning, living!

    You got a life girl! I'm so happy for you
    John


    • k.a.s.s.i.e
      November 11
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      thank you so much John it's what the heart does when you find something good after suffering for so long; the peace after the war. it's incredible i have a life