Here I stand, alone again,
an endless runaway. The
victim of depression and
pain for 15 years, I am
finally running out of
masks to hide my eternal
pain.
Here I stand, alone again,
an tireless runaway. No
matter what they say or
do, I am happier on the
roads than I ever could
have hoped to be back at
home.
Here I stand, alone again,
a ceaseless runaway. Starry
nights and silvery days are
all I have to occupy my
time, yet still I know that
I am happy here – an endless
runaway.
A contest entry
- What Defines You? by English.Muffin.
1300 points, ended November 17, 25 entries
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Comments
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I like this poem. It evokes a feeling of " You're not alone"
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like this alot flows nicely
well done ! -
Like this a lot lass...
had that high lonsome feeling...
really nice flow...
you should be proud of this one little gypsy..
it's excellent.
Bless you,
Liam
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Yay not a prewrite haha.
The structure i do like, a lot. How each stanza ends with one word, and the first two lines repeated throughout.
Also, the enjambment is a very good technique.
Addressed some personal feelings and choices that define you.
Thank you for your entry
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