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Nature Trail

Picture this:
A fox is coming out of his den.
A bird is flying into a cloud.
A fish is swimming in to bubble.
A crocodile is swimming into his nest.
A bee is buzzing to his bee hive.
While the day is young this Poet
begins her day diving in to the Bible.

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I ♥ nature.

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  • Macsword
    November 8
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    Quiet pictures all

    I get the pictures.


  • Kathleen a Nazarene
    November 6

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    A very

    lovely trail indeed! I begin & go through my day in prayer & then end it up in Bible Study. Do crocodiles have nests they can swim into? Didn't know that. I love nature shows that teach me about His creation. All He does & made is amazing.


  • Andre ben-YEHU
    November 6

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    Wise-Wonderful-Profound...



    With diamond letters this poem is etched on a platinum scroll... "Nature Trail" glows.

    In respect and admiration,

    Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU


  • Lanasaur
    November 6

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    I love the describing word. 'diving' for 'begins her day diving in to the Bible.' I really like how you used the word diving in this poem. I've noticed you really are nature friendly in your poem and really fabulous in your poems!Love this descriptive vibe you've got goin on! Love it!Keep penning!!
    Lana


  • Puppydog gold member
    November 6

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    LOVELY !!!!!!

    Ah, one can feel so much as they see all of these beautiful sights and then settle in to read God's word.

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