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MLIA entry - Not a Poem

Today I was feeling really down about the fact that the guy I was crushing on asked some other girl out so I told my favourite bear that I loved it for always listening and being there. I got freaked out when it said it loved me too till I remembered that it has a special voice button in it that says I love you when you press it. MLIA

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  • Poetic-Theorem silver member
    November 6

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    LMAO
    MLIA
    I wish my cat would talk that nice


  • SpydurPoet gold member
    November 6

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    That's hilarious. I must put one of these devices in my own teddy bear. LOL
    ROFL
    Thanks for entering the contest & best of luck.
    Write on
    ~*~SP~*~