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Blurred Truth of Mind

Truth is what we want to be

Accept it's not so very hard

Close our eyes just not to see

Even those who we call smart

 

It is a thing hard to explain

What is true and what is fake

This question made here to remain

When true to me is fake to you

 

It's all about what we believe

Not all of us see things the same

My hero could just be a thief

Our mind the only one to blame

 

We feel a thing so deep inside

Our brain can blind our eyes

Truth is fast then pushed aside

Too strong our love for lies

 

No one can force our mind

To believe what we think fake

We will pretend it to be kind

But our truth no one can take 

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  • Medivaughan
    November 10

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    Well done, well done 'My hero could just be a thief'... This line I thought was very good...'It's all about what we believe'... I like your style. There are many great lines in ths poem I think. I could be here quoting for a long time. Well done xxx


  • Firequeen
    November 9

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    WOW
    thought provoking
    this is a great write
    i love the honesty that lays within it
    Thank you for sharing
    keep the ink flowing.
    fire


  • Jayde1
    November 6

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    cool

    this is a cool poem you have penned...
    with a great theme...

    really liked this stanza..

    We feel a thing so deep inside
    Our brain can blind our eyes
    Truth is fast then pushed aside
    Too strong our love for lies


    nice work...well done

    Jayde