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Upon Receiving the News

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I wear these fragile fragrances,

remember the sultry scents of flowers you gave me

burrowed deep within my bones,

beauty shuddering mid-stride with haunting tenderness,

slow sighs drifting in a moonless night.


They reveal roots searching underneath

this vulnerable parchment,

salving wounds I had forgotten

or did not know were there.


You scattered soulful seeds behind the garden gate,

extending its horizon beyond the edge of vision;

you yearned for patient blooms to open

within my shadowed eyes. 

 

Quietly, we recall your presence among us,

a subtle whisper of your voice drifting

through the shuttered window -

how deep is this silence that haunts us now,

in your absence. 

 

We wait for words that cannot be spoken,

plead for music we shall never hear again.

 

The lamp slowly dims,

anticipating sunlight we will not feel.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 





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Art: Pino Daeni

 

 

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  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    November 19

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    Awesome entry!
    Congratulations on your gold trophy; I would say it is much deserved!
    All the best to you!
    Good luck!


  • Danny Beatty gold member
    November 16
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    yeah good for you ya beat me again ... but ... I told ya that was a great poem and was gonna swipe it and all that ... anyhow do you wanna dance with me ?


  • UnbreakableSoul gold member
    November 15

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    This take on the prompt is brilliant!
    Excellent write Night Hope, so sad and the flow of this piece is genius!
    Thank you so much for your entry and good luck to you!


  • Danny Beatty gold member
    November 7

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    too many people will understand the sadness emanating from within this piece.

    too many have undertaken the path that leads from sorrow.

    good luck in the contest.



  • Rhiannon-Rose
    November 7
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    wow thts really good!

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