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An attempt at expression

Current moon phase
denies category

Deeper realized heart
prefers different worlds

where calamity is scattered

though still identifiable 

so wonderment doesn't lack

proper comparisons

 

steadily soul

continues research 

 

The whole of truth

often falls victim to

mourning sickness

 

Though all I perceive

of love beyond practicality

is bound up within you

 

Technicalities of why

should remain for

the span of our lives

 

 

 

 

 

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A contest entry

I am not a duck.

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  • vampireblood
    November 26
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    This was good, I liked your word choice and the whole poem actually. Nice job.
    Thanks for entering and best of luck to you in my contest.

    ~Vampy


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    November 7

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    Only you can write this way... with such astounding thought put into such amazing language... your depth always gives me pause in the most enjoyable way!



    (a duck? lol)