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It Will Be Good

Approaching Midnight
there is nothing to know
Burning candlelight
there is no need to go
Don't worry bout where this is going
I only know
It will be good

Don't worry 'bout the others
who cares if they know
Sparks from entwined fingers
intensity building slow
Don't worry 'bout where this is going
I only know
It will be good

The flame is burning
now we finally know
Answer to the yearning
Come morning will you go

Author notes

I was really trying for something a bit on the erotic side, this is what I would allow. I suppose suggestive will have to do. Gotta love early 70's hard rock for the tune on this one.
From "Keep it simple stupid" vol III

I have no idea-you decide.

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  • Lowell Poe
    November 16
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    caught me in a financial bind...lol
    deserves 5 stars...

  • Lowell Poe
    November 16
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    Very different for you....
    you went out on a league and it payed off my friend...
    reminded me of that old bob seger tune...we got tonight....
    very spontaneous romantic feel..
    i like to this in a poet i know...
    jumping in a different pool....
    especially when the water is fine...


    Excellent ,
    Liam


    • MichaelLeeSmyth
      November 16
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      I was sort of challenged by another of my faves to dabble at a little sensuality. It is very much harder than I thought it would be.
      That you would even compare this to "We've Got Tonight" is high praise indeed. I was thinking along the lines of a couple of FB's who may be on the way to something deeper.
      Thanks again, I dabble on a little darker side on "To Serve".
      be with you my brother


  • ReachingForStars
    November 16
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    I love it.... there's a subtle scent of the sensational in these lines... well written piece, this. =]
    -K

    • MichaelLeeSmyth
      November 16
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      Thanks much! You never really know when a casual relationship might ignite into something more. Don't be in a hurry to dismiss something with a hint of danger in it to stay within the static if comfortable confines of the status quo.
      This is inspired by the guitar powered rock coming out of New York City in the early 70's.


  • Snowing Kisses gold member
    November 6

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    mmmmm. michael this is enough to send a naive english poet a tad fuzzy inside....nice write sweetness.
    sparks from entwined fingers...mmm...i used o love when tat happened


    • MichaelLeeSmyth
      November 6
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      Thanks T, I was hoping you might like it.

      • Snowing Kisses gold member
        November 6
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        it had the undertone of romance which i love...with te hint of suggestion to make my mind wander...most effective lol

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