And it seems to go:
BOOM!
BOOM!
BLAM!
BOOM!
Cannonfire rapidly bursting like fireworks, all throughout my brain
Jimmy dancin' round like a madman
And burnin' away!
BOOM!
boom.
BOOM!
Smash apart the darkness
Fill it with flames. light up your eyes
Mention the words
Freely versing the bombs, going;
BOOM BOOM BOOM!
And you'll stand back in awe
When my flesh gives way
To shining golds and oranges and crimsons
Colors of fire!
Manic men with handgrenades, little girls with atom bombs
Make that grand symphony,
With your orchestra of explosions!
BOOM BOOM BOOM!
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Very good poem with an excellent use of contrast and onomotopias. (I think that's how it's spelled) Keep on writing!
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