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To Want

Touching,
Hugging,
Kissing,
to much,
not enough,
for you,
I hate,
Itake,
just stop,
but can't,
it's weird,
it's crazy,
for you to want,
and for me to not.

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  • Kendal Palmer gold member
    November 8

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    the rhythm of this piece is unique and really pulls the reader in...More please!! Thanks for sharing. Welcome to AP! keep that ink flowing!
    peace and light,
    Kendal


  • morgana raven Greeters member
    November 8

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    Welcome to Allpoetry

    What I like about this is that though there are few words in each line the wording actually gives it such a good flow of confusion and uncertainty. The skipping over everything and it sounding broken, either way a great write.
    Welcome to the site, if you have any questions please feel free to ask.
    Laura,
    site-greeter.