the noise of piano drifts away
you let go of my hand
(don't leave me come back here, don't go)
but words are worthless
it won't change your mind
instead of keeping you caged, I set you free
(good bye)
tears drip down my face
A contest entry
- Round 2: OPEN FOR EVERYONE!!! AS WELL AS FINALISTS! by lesbian-in-love.
775 points, ended November 21, 29 entries
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i love it!
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awesome, i love u
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this is very beautiful.
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this is most lovely. im speechless.
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coolio =]
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This was short and very interesting to read. Thank so much for entering and best of luck to you in the contest. Keep up the good work!
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Ooooh lovely work Reabe! <3
Just I think on the 5th line 'you mind' should be 'your mind'?
Anyway awesome poem, I pictured pianos! 
Love you ~
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Ooh I like
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