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Stars

A splendor of twinkling
calls out through the night,
and lingers on waiting
with a soft pixie light.

As dusk inches farther
their faces appear,
with heavenly gazes
and their eyes so sincere.

They stretch out their fingers
sweep light on our face,
their brushes of luster
like a wispy embrace.

Their still mirrored brothers
speckled down below,
adds musters of wonder
to the night's stunning show.

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  • Lanasaur
    November 6

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    inspiring

    Beautiful! Absolutly beautiful. 'They stretch out their fingers
    sweep light on our face,
    their brushes of luster
    like a wispy embrace.' You must have put a lot of thought in it. Very imaginitive, descriptive and beautiful. It glittered my day up!
    Have a nice day!
    Lana