“Forget Not, Poets…”
In the Fort-citadel, — a kingdom of mankind, —
Circled by knowledge’s eaters children... questions raised...
The nature of the cosmos and the root of man,
The Poet revealed to them in Sci-Fi tale-history!
Oral Tradition then was written into libraries,
Many flawful translations... — plagiarism — flourished;
The basis to clear doubts and scintillate awareness
Became lure of the State to propagate serfdom.
In the century of poetic revelation,
The true Poetry’s tasks will ignite the in-Verb
To impress swords of Justice on the doors of Time
To release — in freedom — the spiritual man.
Forget not, Poets... that You’re the creator Fathers
Of the arch-supreme father of the arch-Pontifices
Of religion and holy wars of “Earth and Heavens”;
That we can recreate the fate of the cloned Man!
We descend from Your thought in deeds of the live Verb,
Waiting for the words’ strike to compose the new message
To translate the conceived visions received with notion
Learned... Lived through the creative functions of our lives
To sip dews of bliss, when our natural task's finished.
We are now the reality within a dream…
Rainbows of hope in the cosmos of glowing love;
An impressionist live depicting of soul’s grace
With surreal and symbolistical matching colors
Under the light of wonders and rational wisdom,
Etched on the marble rose walls of life in eternity;
Written and painted by the ever kind Creator,
Enriching the basilica of the Time’s Poets,
Causing envy to ministers and cloned men’s priests
On the Holy Pantheon of the ruling Titans!
By Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Note:
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Be free to say what You want.
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Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
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A Stellar Write!
I truly don't feel worthy, Andre, to comment on such a moving, and deep piece. It would appear that you have captured the very essence of what all true poets accomplish; to change the world with words. Truly, "mightier than the sword." There were so many lovely lines, and verses, throughout this piece,that if I were to tell you which were my favorites, I'd be reciting back your poetry, to you. Suffice it to say that this powerful piece moved me deeply, and has given me something to think, and mull over this evening, as I depart from this place.
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We are now the reality within a dream…
Rainbows of hope in the cosmos of glowing love;
An impressionist live depicting of soul’s grace
With surreal and symbolistical matching colors
Under the light of wonders and rational wisdom,
Well penned...
A heart felt tribute to the poetic muses indeed.
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I will....
..... not forget this was a damned fine piece I am glad I stopped in tonight and was reminded by this why it is I do what I have chose to do. Favorite line: We descend from Your thought in deeds of the live Verb, Waiting for the words’ strike to compose the new message" Reminds me of a poetess that left recently and left her fans hanging wanting more but she was able to just walk away like that!
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Her heartfelt tribute to those poets that recreate art with every word they write...beautifully penned! Thanks for your wonderful comment great to found your work too! Anna-Marie.
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A testimony to us all who spill our life-blood on paper for all the world to absorb into the porous willing minds
You speak with your soul deep, with fluidity and conviction. Keep penning stalwart creator.
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i always love the way you word your poetry. it is very up lifting.. WE ARE NOW THE REALITY WITHIN A DREAM!!! So beautiful
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Sigh...So creatively and brilliantly penned.
The last stanza encompasses so much
"We are now reality within a dream"
Love your line
"An impressionist live depicting soul's grace"
Truly poets are impressionists just as painters were ...creating mood, impressions and much response....It is all lovely....Truly your pennings are getting even more
creative all the time! Bravo! ..Rosemary
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Simply beautiful! stunning!!
love and blessings
Rend
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Wow~
Bravo my Dear Friend and Love the weaving of quilt You have blanketed
Spirit with also the wealth from Message You have spoken
Excellent as always with keen sense from all Senses
Love reference to the in-Verb...
Very Intriguing~ pulling Reader closer to hear more
Also: To sip dews of bliss..
This brings forth a smile
that cannot be measured
The way You brought this to Light~ Excellent!
Bravo!!
Keep that quill dancing Sweet Soul
Thank You for sharing Your Voice
Best wishes in all You do Precious Spirit~
with love & light~ Desire~*~
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I find myself lost as I am captivated by this poem “Forget Not, Poets… “
With each new stanza, each new line you have captured the essence of a poet only to delight your readers. I found this poem to be very intelligent and original. Standing ovations my friend!
Love,
Amera♥
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Sip dews of bliss
And I did indeed as my eyes grew ever larger from your spectacular words. All glory to poets my friend . And you as a leader. And to whose goodness am I pious? Yours for sure. Just brilliant.
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