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This Leaves Me Thinking

why
so beautiful
the rust on the trees
leaving me breathless
smiling
but as i see
old cars
wilting away
brittle orange
i lay here
crying

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  • davidb7869 silver member
    November 6
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    mmmmm...leaves me thinking too :-D...very nice though..hope you are doing well btw..and nice text color..