I'm on quite a trip
& I'm so fucking high
thought I'd give you a tip
that I wouldn't deny
anything you could ask me
of what comes to mind
cause if I'm not sober
information you'll find
I just love the exposure
when the truth's so hardcore
Its like barging through a window
when you could just use a door
Its amazing to see
What finally comes out
after weeks of not venting
when forced upon doubt
So if you need answers
no need for despair
just hand me a fifth
and you're nearly half there!
hah :)
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deffo a witty and clever poem Cheerful rhythm made it even more enjoyable to read
Whilst you had really strong description in there Liked the simile 'it's like barging through a window when you could use the door' showin just how much truth the person might get lol (So been there when drunk!!) ...... clever title toooo kinda backwards =) xx
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I like the cleverness of this poem. The last couple of lines reminds me of Dr. Seuss, which is funny given the topic.
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Yep, inibriated people give lots of informaton, wanted or not. The sometimes rhyme!
Its amazing to see
What finally comes out
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I like the somewhat unexpected rhythm in a poem on this theme.
Works well!xxx
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