With this last kiss,
And my last breath
Here's my last request
And my last wish
To help pull you through,
And this might just be
Your last chance to look into this soul
And see that this world,
Is so God damn lonely and cold without you,
And until all your dreams
Have finaly come true,
I'm going to keep saying these words
Too you,
Every thing that burns inside of me
Is burning brighter than eternity
Just like this fading candle,
You are my everything......
---Now Come On----
And if the Good lord, Should Ever decide to take me away from you
Let everybody know, That I still came through for you,
Cause everything thats burning inside of me
Is burning brighter than all of eternity
Just like this fading candle
You are my everything....
Comments
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This is quite the lyrical piece, one that could easily be set to music, I think. Its emotions lend to its depth and emotion is everything, both in poetry and in song. Well done, Poet. 



