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Well, Would You

This I must ask you my friend,
After today, if tomorrow was the end,

Knowing it is not a lie,
And not being able to say Good Bye,

If someone told you today,
You could make it all go away,

Within your mind it is all swirled,
Knowing it is you who can save the world,

Would you shed a tear, or even cry,
Or would you be willing to die.

Well, could you
Well, would you

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