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Sweet Seductive Sin

The temptress in the night
Captured in his Intoxicated sight
In a land of reckless pleasure delight
in his world of europhic heights

In red wine sips
She dances in perfect rhythm
and swings her hips
in his sensual salacious grip
roaming his fingertips
and his craving luscious lips
as her mind slowly drifts

he draw this beauty near
run his finger in her hair
sensual sexy whisper in her ear
feeling her red lace sexy underwear

kissing passionately at her request
slowly caressing her breast
letting his bare naked flesh do the rest
leaving her sinfully wanton and possessed

with his sensual grin
she shivered into seductive sin
Pressed against his skin
of heated passion
from deep within

sucking into a naughty treat
that felt so sweet
a feeling so complete
in a sinful game of cheat
secretly and discreet
of lies and deciet
explosion when they meet
melting in passions heat
swept her off her feet

in ecstasy of passionate fire
fulfilling her desire

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  • evans.warrington
    November 14
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    the whole piece fire, left me feeling like the devil himself.

    "in ecstasy of passionate fire
    fulfilling her desire "

     

     

     


  • Sector-Hunter silver member
    November 9

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    This is full of heat and passion. Though it is sad when cheating comes into play. I loved this pen here. I was not looking for anything to read but I am glad I saw this it was very well put together SH


  • Sara Khan
    November 8
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    The poem is full of lustful things and is a beautiful erotica


  • Heavenly Angel gold member
    November 7

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    Very sensual and seductive
    Thank you for sharing with Erotic Desires ; the best of luck to you in all your writing endeavors!


  • Ms Lez
    November 6

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    sucking into a naughty treatthat felt so sweet
    a feeling so complete
    in a sinful game of cheat
    secretly and discreet
    Of lies and deceit
    explosion when we meet
    in passion heat
    swept me off my feet.

    The stanza is well written. What a sweet treat!

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