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I Wanna Take You There

I wanna, I wanna, I wanna take you there--
Anytime, anyplace, and anywhere;
Feel your warm body lying beneath mine,
Feel our arms and legs intertwine;
As we touch each other's skin,
As we make each other's head spin;
Your lips I meet, you I softly kiss,
Putting me into a state of pure bliss!
Tongue against tongue, each other we taste--
How I want you, how you make my pulse race!
With my arms around you, I squeeze you tight,
In paradise, we will be tonight!
My desire grows in intensity,
To me, you have become a necessity!
As we moan, as you cry out my name,
Our heat becomes a burning flame;
Faster and faster our hearts beat,
As our bodies merge, as our souls meet;
We come together and join as one--
Stars in our eyes, a midnight sun!
Lying here with you as the dawn breaks,
For you I do hunger, for you I do ache;
Background music, 'Stop, Look, Listen To Your Heart'--
I so hope that we will never part. . .

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  • PurringKitten silver member
    November 19

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    beautiful words of passion and need..a soft growing love between two lovers...music stirring the heart to action...just beautiful and thank you for entering


  • The Voice Of One silver member
    November 7

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    When a meeting like this takes place, who in their right mind is ever going to want to part? No one if they know where the real passion lies, right next to them, sharing the warmth, watching the sun peek above the horizon, allowing a build to arise once more and do it all over again.
    You got a great piece here, one worth pondering on.
    Thanks for joining in, best of luck.


  • Angelic Wolf
    November 6
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    Aww this was sweet
    Good luck in the contest


  • Ms Lez
    November 6

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    Stars in my eyes, a midnight sun
    Lying here with you as the dawn breaks
    For you I do hunger, for you I do ache.

    Excellent, indeed! Beautiful expression.


  • Mi Corazon Late
    November 6
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    Delicate and sensual magic!!!! Looking forward to more of your creations~


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    November 6
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    Wonderfully and beautifully sensual this is
    I truly enjoyed reading
    Wishing you the very best in this contest!
    ~Heavenly~

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