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So many nights

I spent so many nights
laying half dead on the bathroom floor
praying to God for one more-

chance with you
chance for us
to be in love
and not in lust.

I spent so many nights
laying in a pool of my own blood
praying to God for one more-

deep cut
ounce of courage
'chance at death
chance at losing my last breath

I think tonight's the night he'll listen,
answering my prayers in the form of bleach.


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  • Br0kEn WiNgS
    November 7

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    wow this has very strong emotions. i loved the line 'laying half dead on the bathroom floor' i been there. i also loved how you used 'praying to god for one more' because it really pieced it all together. but more than anything this isnt just a poem its your expression of your pain... i love this its such a great deep powerful write. keep expressing yourself and keep up the good work.