Perhaps an inside trader in trying times.
One who has pooped in his pajamas while loosing his mind.
A white Elephant ready to tumble and fall.
Maybe the truth being... I am the AP Whore of them all..
This midnight cowboy strolling alone.
Seeking out lonely strumpets to phone.
Big ,bad and boisterous. Words sublime.
Oh yes ladies, I sure am one of a kind.
Flat footed women on the make.
Shake and bake in the kitchen, the flavor of steak.
And all illusions? Well there just in your mind.
Ha! Ha!...I gonna get ya. Grab that behind.
Sultry, sensual evenings in each of your beds.
Searching and exploring, from the toe to the head.
And no divine intervention, whispers, enough said.
For I am your master. My color , bright red.
A paradox of dreams. Preposterous you say?
Well Hell I'm such a hunk. You, my queen for a day.
Altered delusions. Adultery in flight.
Who gives a damn. You are mine tonight.
But could be I'm a crippled.
Bark bigger then deed.
And the seed of frustration is hidden in me.
But nevertheless, I've fostered a plan.
A modification to your Superman.
So see me as tall. Well muscled and trim.
Hands like a linebacker. As cheerlearders prime.
So give me a shout
If ya think I'm so hot.
Won't cost ya a penny.
Dear I own a car lot. Lol.
By Bob Fox
Please tell me what you think
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Im dying Bob this is my way of saying I am laughing...there are two many lines that I thought were so good...here....really Bob..funny clever..cool...hot...
a bit of this and touch of that what do we got....Bob all in a knot...see I rhymed it....but not that I think that your in knots Bob...this is too loose for that....a real pleasure and I can see your a master...............I can tell........Bob....lol....
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This was well written and entertaining. I liked it. Well Done
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Dear I own my a car lot! Very funny write. Forgiv me if this made me laugh. But I agree, we do have to look past what a person looks like of the outside and truely see them for whom they are in the inside! Love this piece! ~Sie
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i have but one word before i end this comment, LOVED IT, keep it flowing wait that is two words.
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"pooped in his pajamas" I considered to be a bit crass, however realistic. Some things need to be kept to ones self however, and that is one to be kept on a need to know basis, like a doctor/patient confidentiality, perhaps?
A very cocky attitude throughout. I like the line " bark bigger than deed" because I've found through out my life on line that most men who are impotent can talk up a sexual storm, in fact most are as gifted as poets at it, and I end up telling them, you need to be writing erotica
On line 24 I think you meant plan not plane...a typo?
line 31 "dear I own a car lot"
echoes the need that older men have to show their potential worth with the almighty dollar sign, by showing themselves in hot cars, etc....or even going so far as to show pictures of their houses, or other material goods.
I think this is an excellent look into the drive of the older man. I liked it tremendously, it was very funny and very insightful.
Thank you!
debs
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an ap whore.. in this pajama party filled the score for on the steak you did fry.. to find away in a different place for you are on the make..hundreds read and their muse.. found someone who new you were superman but who would want your used car lot all rode hard and put up wet
just a little tx slang,, well penned h rap for this is funny bull corn 
hugs always Angel♥
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My Dear
This makes me think I need a new car...maybe somethin' in RED, Superman? -
You skewered the AP pervs again. For shame.
Mike
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Good and funny
You captivated my interests again Bob, with your new poem. Great job,
thanks for sharing..... Mary
ps, would you please take look at my website? I'd love to have you share your poetry with us. Mary http://mareannspoetry.ning.com
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Exquisitely accomplished...
The exoteric... The obvious in this -- is a wise way to paint the wild side of our politically and hierologicaly society in congenital hypnotic trance; (When will wake up?) -- but its arcane has no doors locked, and therefor, when one re-read this on the second time... the bells of reason sing to awarenes.
"Pajama parties" I read, and am very impressed with what I have learned through the lines of this dynamo of thoughts.
In respect and admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
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May be your best yet.Fire and brimstone..You brought them both in this one.Great thought expression going on here.You had me laughing all the way through...Your descriptions of male versus females is gorgeous.Truly a great write..I loved reading it................for the third time.
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I love this. No if ands or buts. Had me laughing the whole way through. Great write, Bob!
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Oh, fuckin' snap!!! LMFAO!!! Perfect!!! Last line is so perfect because in this day and age if certain women/men/people just hear you own a "car lot" they're there, regardless of whatever... You touch on you, women (and men's materialistic tendencies in this day and age), society, etc.... Loved it!!! And, you managed to bring so many realities into one: society /"insider trading"; ap poets whether they or you be "whores"; sports /"linebackers"; iconic figures /"Superman"; even cowboys, paradoxes, and dreams, lol.... This one has it all... Damn, Bob, Jay-Z should be buyin' your shit, lol... Microcosmoses... Well done, "open-eared" poet... I predicted shit like this in '92 when my final english major paper compared Walt Whitman to IceCube... lol.... Damn... This is true poetry today...
Peace,
Russell
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lmao. this is wonderful play on words.....
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Amusing!
Moon
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