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Who The Hell Are You.(Triolet)

Who the hell are you
Glaring, staring out at me
Stop the venom that you spew
Who the hell are you
Find yourself a new venue
Hit the road, let me be
Who the hell are you
Glaring, staring out at me.
                                   

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  • Poetic-Theorem silver member
    November 7

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    Outstanding take and triolet...
    The quest to be freed from demons [ pains, depressions, addictions, etc..] is an horrific internal battle..the mirror becomes these controling demons causes the Deterioration of fragile, damaged minds..
    Very well done..wish you the best..David