I've been losing sunlight
living down below
inside my lonely mind
Never compromise
syntehsize
everything comes alive
Set the groove down
get off that lazy behind
move your feet to the beat
Bass is in the lead
going to move
to the head of the line
Leave em all behind
never one from the tribe
hit me with that bribe
Shredding time
down below
in my lonely frame of mind
Bass is in the lead
Drums are going to bleed
lay down the law
quarter to the eigth
Leave em all behind
harmonize
it's time to let loose
and fly
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a w a n n a b e p o e t -
I got this crazy funky sound in my head going round and round
so words just came out to the top, seems my brain was gonna pop!
So now this weekend I have to lay do the music I am hearing somehow.
Please tell me what you think offer some advice on how to make it just that much better
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shredding time
nice line !! I love the beat and the flow to this poem; great work huni and I do hope that you fly 
xx DD 
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nothing but the beat in time that hits the mind and leaves me behind as the suns sets someplace else.. well penned for you always have a deep mindset in the heart where words have a home to live in..always well done
always Angel♥
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Awe Angel,
Thank you so very much for that sweetie. you are always there with some mighty fine words for to encourage me.
I really appreciate that.
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woohoo
feeling the vibe on this one...its cool....
can here this to funky or crazy acid jazz....
nice one uncle...
loved this bit..
Leave em all behind
harmonize
it's time to let loose
and fly
awesome stuf.....keep it up
Jayde
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ain't it all so much fun this stuff.
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its all good......being a creative kinda soul wether it be poetry or music.......ITS ALL AMAZING FUN.....
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perfect*
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Awe, shucks thank you so much for that.
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