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Gaze of an Arrow

For she is the
cause of a
blue-eyed suicide

The pierce with
the depth
of an arrow

plunged deep, concreted in

Finishing with what has
just started

Pushing in deeper,
her fatal gaze
hoping for it
to corrupt

All of this cause
she left you broken

It finally comes
swept over you
Her goal met

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