Loud is the voice of uncertainty
the volume disguising the doubt
Soft is the voice of wisdom,
confident, no need to shout.
An untruth always needs affirmation
simply repeating will seldom contend
truth may be calm and unobtrusive
but will always come out in the end
A contest entry
- BWOW~~Best Write of the Week~~#26...with aboomer, and Starz of Heaven by islekine.
700 points, ended November 15, 14 entries
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Comments
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short, concise - and full of wisdom!
nicely done! I enjoyed this.
thank you for your entry
best wishes in the contest
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Starz of Heaven
Many Thanks for your kind comments on "Voices" so glad you like it.
.....Best Wishes....George...... -
aboomer
Many Thanks for your kind comments on "Voices" so glad you like it
Best Wishes....George......
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I liked this missing some punctuation in a few spots but none the less nice piece thanks for entering have a great weekend best wishes to you always be well.
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Very wise words...
well penned...concise...I like that! Best wishes in the contest and always...Thanks for your entry...hope to see you again...Write on and on.
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islekine
Many thanks for your kind comments on "Voices"glad you liked it
.........Best Wishes.......George....
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Nice read. Our conscience always will nag us about our false beliefs. True beliefs are settled and calm and feel good.
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great write, so true...good luck in the contest...
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wow...oh my george...i love this...its incredibly wise...well crafted...and just thoroughly satisfying
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Wise. Profound.
"Voices" is a subtle, sweet offering for the raucous Soul stammering for
visibility in a maelstrom of invisibility.
Simple truths bite into the bone of Honor in "Voices."
With gratitude and appreciation!
STAY
for ever
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I like the rhythm, rhyme and flow of these lines and the message you share with others in these lines. How true what you say here - that soft voices do not need to shout to make their point -truth certainly does come through in the end. Think this is a great topic to write aboput for this contest as well.
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Great poem!
It is so true that uncertainty is always loud and wisdom soft....
Such wise words.
Well done and best of luck in the contest.
Love
Sonya
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