under April sky
a tulip spills her cup
spring rain
Author notes
Haiku - modern form
Zen poetry
A contest entry
- first day of rain---- by Purush.
600 points, ended November 20, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
your suggestions are always welcomed
Comments
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The female personification,
a pleasant touch.
Well done!!
M-C
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For some reason I get a picture in my head of the flowers in the movie Bambi when the big rain comes and all the water is spilling out of them.... Anway, great visual imagery here. Very vivid wording.
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this was lovely, i pictured it as a buncg of tulips in a flower bed with rain it in them falling over and watering the ground...
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beautifully described
under April sky
a tulip spills her cup
spring rain
"spilling her cup"
beautifully described
all the best in my contest
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