Have you been for a swim,in the water of life,
Is it cold and dry ?wet?,like a day to forget,
Are you swimming against the flow,Do you really know,
Or drowning in the day,,Just a thought nothing else to say.
Purpose and secure,go on,never fall,rule for us all,
Just a swim that keeps us afloat,no need to panic,
Everything is pure,no need for allure,that is for sure,
Doing your best,like all the rest,forward on our journey
One thing for sure,we will reach an end,all drown an eventual part
The secret is just knowing,not: tooing and frowing: really want a know
Well I do as well,please I do not want to go to hell,Is life about knowing
Can we be sure,or is there a being ,who we answere to in a dark place.
Please tell me what you think
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This is an excellent write. I really loved the last stanza. You did a great job with this. Keep up the great writing hun. Keep on smiling and good luck in everything you do.
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these are questions that we all come to at some point in our lives...I think you articulated them quite well in this write! good job! thank you for sharing. I'll be back for more soon...
peace and light,
Kendal
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