Rain rain, come back please,
I知 waiting here; I知 on my knees,
Come wash away all my strife
I知 not sure how much longer, I can live this life!
I try so hard as time goes by
To forget my troubles and let them lie.
A little help wont go a miss
I致e forgotten how it feels, to live in bliss!
Gone are the days where I could sit and play
My childhoods in the past and its there to stay,
Memories of old are buried with in
I look back often a huge great grin!
But in ten years time I'm struggling to see
To what I can look back on and grin with glee,
Just anguish and hate is all there値l be
It seems as if life is going to be tuff for me.
And as I write this I feel much better,
I don稚 need the rain, I壇 just get wetter.
Time for the sun to come out I pray,
To dry the rain,
So I can go out and play!
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In the first stanza, second line I think "her" was meant to be "here".
In the fourth stanza, "i'm" should be "I'm".
Other than those few typos I think you did wonderful with this. I especially loved the last stanza, it brings it together well there at the end. Rhyme and flow are excellent! Keep up the great writing. : -
Rain Man
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James
How this piece can apply to many I am sure. But let it rain another day. For as they say ...Anyday above ground is a good day. LOL
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