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A Letter To Death

Dear Death,

Why is it you always wear black?
And do you think you could give me my lover back?

He was in the middle of explaining something to me when you took his last breath away,
and I mean, come on! It was the middle of the day!

He was supposed to die in his sleep so I would have a whole day to organise the funeral,
but now I only have half a day, it's absolutely terrible!

Can't you allow it just this once, I haven't told anyone he's dead yet,
oh and if you say no, you'll forever regret it...

From,
A VERY annoyed person.

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  • Little Lesley
    November 18
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    Haha, this is very funny.


  • Lanasaur
    November 6

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    Intresting and unique..I like your ideas, it is a bit confusing however the background suits it and i like at the end where you wrote. 'From,
    A VERY annoyed person.' Clever write. Keep penning!


  • spiritual wolf
    November 6
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    lol..this was interesting and good. it was sobering reality but this one takes death and makes light of it. great write