parched brown summer lawns
absorb autumn soaking rains
like thirsty sponges
A contest entry
- first day of rain---- by Purush.
600 points, ended November 20, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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great imagery and so true. Best of luck in this contest. Enjoyed your write
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Nicole
Thankyou for your very complimentary comments, your good wishes and your generous applause.
Best wishes from 'down under'.
Bisnonno Shenton
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emphasizes the cream
parched brown summer lawns
absorb autumn soaking rains
like thirsty sponges
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oh!
the last line emphasizes the cream
All the best in my contest -
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Purush
Thankyou for reading and commenting. I send you my best wishes from 'down under'.
Shenton
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