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Beware bloodsuckers

In the din and bustle of human race
when I am almost lost in the mess,
I get an opportunity to express myself
telling my tale in my own voice.

Why the people are so hypocrite and
do not like to move straight at all,
tell one thing keeping something else,
totally contrary, in the mind?
Why they stab from back
while smiling when face to face?
Why they want to make me invalid
when they find that they cannot compete?
Why they ruin others lives
misusing their power?
Why no help comes, even from the Almighty,
how can He remain mum?

I shall not keep quiet, not anymore.
I like to call all those who are oppressed.
Come and join hands to expose the ploy
we shall not allow them to suck our blood.

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  • LesbianOfLove silver member
    2 days ago
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    Pretty good, the flow seems a bit off at times because of your play on tenses but really good idea going here. Thanks for entering the contest and best of luck to you!


  • Joshua DePesa
    November 16
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    Very unique. I love how it is written.


  • Mr Id
    November 7

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    A powerful proposal of unity for all good people.

    Nice work!