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kill me

blow my brains out
take me seriously I dare you
Slit my throat
Nothing stopping you
hang me from a tree in the garden out the back
You'll scare the kiddies if they see me hanging there
Burn me at the stake
Im like a witch convicted from the past
Promise that you'll take my life
I swear I won't hold this against you
Please kill me sweetly
kill me quietly
Kill me slowly
Your killing me anyway
Just take my life
I'm already dying on the inside

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its sounded cool, i dont really want to be killed

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  • Ascry
    November 10
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    but...

    otherwise a really cool poem liz

  • Ascry
    November 10
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    you better not, id miss you


  • LesbianOfLove
    November 10

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    Deep, strong emotion in this poem. I've felt the same way too many times, Anger, frustrated, hopeless, fed up. I hope that if youre feeling this way you find a way out of the darkness. Great poem though, keep writing!