I cannot seem to destroy this pain,
I feel it's eating at me again.
Eating my soul from deep within,
Is this a battle I'll never win?
I try to overcome it with all my might,
But find I haven't the strength to fight.
It knows I'm powerless, it knows me well,
That's why into this pit I've fell.
The walls are slippery, the walls are steep.
No one even knows I'm here, and I keep,
Falling back the few step's that I take...
But if it's just one step at a time I must make,
l'll reach the top, one day I'll make it through,
Because God has promised, He said I believe in you.
He's took my hand now, it was there all the time...
I love Him so much for being a friend of mine.
Comments
-
cool
pain ..walled and retained..bore and stored.....so intense and heartfelt..love dthis poem dear -
awesome
Once again, you penned so well, dfntly God can save us from the pit of Hell. I wuz really feelin I .... I cant destroy this pain, and .... I try to overcome with all my might....yeah I can relate, thas for sho!! But wut?? God believes in "me" wow, thas deep, hmmmm we will reach da top one day. great write!!

-
that ounds just like my life,well done

-
Well spoken




