Whispered words seduce my soul
I'm captive to your charms,
lost within your arms so soft
as all my fears you calm.
I'm lost in your enchantment's realm
I'm safe and loved most whole,
all senses overpowered now
and I've lost all control.
'Cross mountains high, through rivers deep
I'm mesmerised to you
and always when the going's tough
within your sphere subdued.
Within the night the stars cannot
compare to how I feel,
I only know that in your world
my life spins most surreal.
You have so many loving ways
compelling me to you,
it's hard to find the words to say
how much my love is true.
Author notes
Prompt - Irresitible 15-20 lines
In a list
A contest entry
- Prompt For You #1 by Jeremy0826.
750 points, ended November 15, 12 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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This is so beautiful and filled with some lovely imagery!
I love these lines from you:
"Cross mountains high, through rivers deep
I'm mesmerised to you
and always when the going's tough
within your sphere subdued.
Within the night the stars cannot
compare to how I feel,
I only know that in your world
my life spins most surreal."
What a sincere and heartfelt piece you've written
here. Thank you so much for entering my contest!
Good luck to you with it an keep up the wonderful work!
Jeremy0826 -
I read
the poem before I scrolled down to the prompt. Very nice. I like te way your mind worked this word poet.
Within the night the stars cannot
compare to how I feel,
lovely.
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Excellent
Wow, you sure painted irrestible so very well. What a terrific take on the prompt. The very best in the contest
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