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a year in the life

 I

 

it's when the swallows came,

rounded towers, mud nests,

a sweet song on the air

 

sea churned sand,

smoothed the frowns,

watched children gather there

to greet the first whale

 

we ended a chapter that month

when blossom cried like confetti

 

II

 

we bellowed with fire

and scuffed the park,

skimming with leaves and scarves

 

we wait for a final goodbye

when that tiny bird waves his wing

 

a tree moans in loneliness

for the loss of a friend

 

III

 

one icicle hangs

a pointed reminder,

it glistens in the face of darkness

 

illuminates us

behind the glass

with frosted memories

 

we wait the storm

its face blowing from the north

and the coolest of kiss

 

IV

 

rampant trade winds fly

a curlew screeches

dolphins breach

i find a happiness in the sun

 

his features refined

and as you watch the far horizon

i think of white yachts 

cosy niches and lazy coves

 

a wonder of how long this warmth will last

how nothing changes a circle

even without your embrace

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Peripatetic gold member
    November 21
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    Vistas and memories offer grand prospects and minute details in which impression and reality each play a part. Images are viewed with visual dimensions and emotional depth which are recorded in time by the mind and the heart. We have as well the sounds of the days in the times of the year in these compelling vignettes. The sensual tones also call forth the loves from each season and absence's regrets.


  • Pure Thought silver member
    November 6

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    beautifully expressed
    ... and all this happens
    while I remain inside with a single view


    • Cannonsfire
      November 6
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      lol sometimes you need to take a walk outside, it's amazing


      • Pure Thought silver member
        November 7
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        planning on doing just that on Sunday. Going to the higher elevations to shoot some pictures.


  • Amera gold member
    November 6

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    This is truly captivating! You have taken the best and most vivid emotions of each season and brought them to life. Stunning!

    Love,
    Amera♥


  • JinSays gold member
    November 6

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    San Juan and Dana Point. Some of the most expensive land in California. it was beautiful, wasnt it? Remember the spirit rock-garden? werent those wild? This is lovely darling, just splendid.
    love,
    jin


    • Cannonsfire
      November 6
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      It was superb, and moreso because i got to see it with good friends, that makes it even more special

  • Rowan gold member
    November 6

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    You must be tired of this word, but I'm saying it anyway...
    stunning.


  • michael thomas gold member
    November 6

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    Just stupendous expostulation. Daring the perceptions of changing seasons. You make me breathe in admiration of your words.

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