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∑סς Psalter; Part iii - Closeness of Souls

 

 

 

 

The ∑סς Psalter - pt iii

 

Takes us into the world of Greek Mythology,

exisiting as pergatory.

An Epic poem by Titus Llewellyn.

 

The illusion to which an evasive society learns

Has the brains of an ass and ugliness full

Mistrust by impending, without taking turns

Shall always in doubt, be as deaf to the call.

 

 

 

 

William's death seems to exist inside a new exploratory.

 

 

Bordering upon something obeying the laws of physics, I have to be whole heardetly neutral to discover myself what inlaid ideal can next to often, not decide. Rather than human nature, which in reverse becomes chain reaction to those events, measured by constriction than construction, though intentional or not, is in fact, a spelling differential.


To whom word of phrases mimics, it is the passing stage of stumbling effects that would in the living sense, be self inclined to the donimno effect, decline to semaphore hindsight, to raise my suspicion on spirituality as seemingly debating the afterlife.

Disposing any keen pretext, more as the pessimist, though love carrying through with an offering of fair assumptions. I ask you, "is it wishful thinking", or is this obsessive love able to persevere where the simple hope failed? I feel that line 1101 interprets binary, and I have no doubt that the phrase on that line and the one after speak like some 'Butterfly Effect.' ..."or resting while the other in contrast, tormented we should keep those souvenirs!"

The line at 1038  "initially to sought long windings path", I am sure is either umbilical or intestinal. Whatever and wherever it leads to, one thing is for certain, it is either the birth or death of an entity. Once again, if you add all the numbers up, it equals 11, a positional notation with a radix of 2 - to say that each to the other may be some distance apart but are in relation, a determined pry as to whether it is switch off or not.

                                                                           Francis Bacon, 1605


Engulfed by this the saturated norm,                                      1025
announce without due question to reform
beyond what recognition it has shown,
who cluster the resounding view, unknown
emotions that have altered love's frontier
reduced by ample quantities austere,                                      1030
suspend themselves in mists of bourguignon,
too vast that all too soon absorb veneer
transparent, though combines it as diffuse
The full caress of ethers they seduce,
an elementary life style each has known,                                1035
is burdened less by this fruition zone
the signature that stars who glimmer have
initially, to sought long windings path.
  

 

 

How else, shall we be blessed or be assumed
whose own reversal claims are whether groomed                1040
as having the eternal life, like death
for after-life consumes it one long breath,
believing it were true, that to discard
forever by judgemental disregard,
the hope that living 'twas death's prelude                              1045
though proven fact delights, I do conclude.
Horizons' are not reached, but there they are
delivers it unanswered, then the star,
as far the eye can see, then death shall so
explain the immortality I know.                                             1050
If lost for words, then death for me somehow
shall invite you to silence this avow.
  

 

Loosely, had my dreams from last night's sleep,

been interupting those whose drift away

were often meant, that while awake I peep                           1055

from keeping, dread the fear from love's decay;

I reckon by absorbing your caress,

The warmth of longing in your arms much more

cannot be such, compared to hugging less,

a sleepless night with daydreams to suppress                    1060

Indulge to wonder why, whilst both apart,

the other strives to contemplate desire,

by leading you with dreams you can admire 

how close I have become to you sweet heart;

If all, but closing eyes, could hear the chime                       1065

on each occasion counting leaps of time.


Beholden, no less likelihood undo;
Includes the untied version of accrue,
The task of equal share as love knots hold,
To heed the warning caution first foretold.                          1070
That once the knot between us tied can both,
That we belong drawn lots instilling growth,
Become a question asked as answers range
From trust exhibit loathes by part exchange.
She far exceeds the ravishing past tense,                             1075
Adorned to love's exceeding worn immense.

Sincerely had our words been introduced,
although a long time since those words were we
not only we, our longed for love produced
demand was more plutonic ecstacy;                                    1080
remember how the words we used to share
announced to one another like we did?
More worthy had we done, let us permit!
Verily, I do, and still admit,
each time I see the name 'twas thought forgot,                   1085
did'st pose a sort of prompted more than not
nostalgic sense one's dream it seems befit
offered are in these words of most sincere,
to toast ourselves this close to being near!

So able I am near enough to tears,                                        1090
not known for tact I can but say appears
as admirable our efforts are - good friends
delivered may more freely make amends
rekindled from the days I saw your name,
My intuition spoke, and we became                                    1095
and asked myself, "Where had I seen before?"
Voluptuous in spoken terms, and more,
enough far wiser said, the unheard had
not knowing can evade one to be sad
insured that quite a while had swept us past                     1100
or resting while the other in contrast
tormented we should keep those souvenirs!

Delectable, that shade of non-such means
who more than once excitedly convenes,
that poses such, a soul to soul divine                                  1105
instruct as do initiatives entwine,
Composed, that from a cuddle, both at ease
tranquil, so that a hint of total peace
gain know-how by suggesting we remain
lets isolated bliss to silence reign.                                       1110
Say not a word my love, for this I show
as sanctuary's independant flow
committed to the womb-like loveliness
more godly, than our sharing of love is.
When two as one collide with equa
l fight,                         1115
if force from which entitlement well might.

 

 

The line numbers are not coinicidental they are somehow, quatrains.

 

Cerberus   1300?

 

 

 

We are somewhat guided to the constellation, Canis Major,

from which the notable character of dog reminds us

that this is where you began your journey Asha, guarding

what has become so

 

 

 

 

editing taking place

 

 

 

 

 

 

dark veils hover upon the horizon 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

William's visions of Titus Flavius Vespasianus

 

Not only do we drift exporatory space, but a whole tribune

of enquires that battle like they do. With their infinitive

wisdom, writhe dead.

 

The Emperor

This composition suggests a love affair between

Titus and Domitian's wife Domitia Longina.

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  • william death is new and therefore, not only is he becoming aware to his surroundings, he's also challenged as well, by Father Hugh, biblically, and Asha, mentally.

  • Once again my friend you have found a way to bring back that classic penmanship that i love so much, sometimes i don't get it but i don't get most things lately, so that is just me, keep it flowing


  • MichaelLeeSmyth
    November 6

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    Some punctuation would be very helpful on some of the lines.

    I tend to read everything aloud when reviewing.

    too vast, that all too soon, absorb veneer

    I will come back to this. I really like the concept and story, just have some word use questions.

    Peace


  • JinSays gold member
    November 6
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    Tony,
    I love your epic, though I have to confess there are some part here that confused me a little, or threw me off where I thought the thread of though was going. Sometimes you do that to me, ya know? I will be reading along, and following properly, then you throw in something that makes me go back, thus crushing the path I already had. Of course it's 5:44 a.m. still, and I am barely awake.
    Maybe I should make it a rule to read you before I go to bed.
    A little explanation of your characters would be nice too-a bit of narrative.
    Other than that, splendid. s1035...long windings path? Just curious.
    love to you, my dear.
    jin


  • Andre ben-YEHU
    November 6

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    Essentially beautiful...

    I have enjoyed the reading of "EOS (Goddess of the Dawn) , pt iii - Closeness of Souls", which ignited the dynamo of my imagination, and stimulated my historic hierological and mytheological (Mythology and Theology.) veins.

    I admire the literary efforts and dedicated time of the author of "EOS" to produce an exemplary masterpice that honors the language and adds value to the major art of Poetry.

    If His Holiness, Poet Hesiod was among us, I am certain that He would stand up and embrace the author of "EOS".

    Much gratitude to the author of "EOS (Goddess of the Dawn) , pt iii - Closeness of Souls" for keeping the lights of his Castle Poetry always on.

    In respect and admiration,

    Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

    • JinSays gold member
      November 6

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      "If His Holiness, Poet Hesiod was among us"

      ...then females would still be blamed for the downfall of man.
      I loved him for Pandora, but have to draw the line somewhere.
      this was a lovely comment, but I felt compelled to speak up, thank you.

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