A coating of space hugs
in shiny skin,
where joins meld
like sutures holding in reality
and nothing but a façade
tempts pseudo erections,
something hard in softness’s guise;
is it truth or lies?
Author notes
Beauty will be convulsive - VladimirBorowicz
"Be Beautiful, Be Brutal, But Most Of All Be Truthful"
A contest entry
- Brevity; image inspired. by Naridill.
600 points, ended November 13, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Honest Critique Requested
Comments
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Wasn't sure about the end line but in the end it worked. This spun my head as you always tend too, I adored it. !
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I looked at the picture prompts and was slightly intrigued. Your poem, while seemingly stark in nature, also has a great depth to it, as well. Good luck in the contest, Sweetie. 
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