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Walk into your divine destination.


O God just be with us, we shall get the destination-
I know at times, I myself, prefer to partake in nothing but procrastination.
Procrastination of doing your will.
Ignoring your voice and pretending  your not real!
But Lord-I ask for your forgiveness, once more and again.
Because I know that I continue to fall short, and live my life inflat out sin!
I know that you are real, and I feel you pricking at the core of my heart
But I'm scared to let go, of the life I know, Lord be patient, please don't depart.
I am yearning to be who and what you have called me to be-
I am so confused, and yet continue to allow my mind to be controlled by the enemy!!
I know if I would let go of the worldly things
That you Lord would set me in high places,for I know I am an heir of the King.
Lord, I think I am ready, help me to follow through
Yes, this time I am serious, I am ready to surrender to You!!
Surely there are others like me-
Who have fought and fought, but can't break free.
O God just be with us, we shall get the destination.
Yes, I myself am ready to walk into your divine revelation.

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  • Beautiful-N-Broken gold member
    November 8

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    But I'm scared to let go, of the life I know, Lord be patient, please don't depart.
    I am yearning to be who and what you have called me to be-
    I am so confused, and yet continue to allow my mind to be controlled by the enemy!!
    I know if I would let go of the worldly things
    That you Lord would set me in high places,for I know I am an heir of the King.
    Lord, I think I am ready, help me to follow through
    Yes, this time I am serious, I am ready to surrender to You!!


    I love these lines. You did a great job penning this and it's beautiful. Keep up the great writing and keep that ink flowing.

    • atomic-angel
      November 8

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      Thank you for ur da sweet comments, Ahh2day wulda been a gud day2 surrender-such is life, Im still in da game-cuz im still here-thanks again-luvin da name...Beautiful-n-broken, that speaks 4so many

  • dreamofolwin
    November 6

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    An awesome write, Lol. So honest and heartfelt. I felt every word. I can relate toytally to this poem in my life just now.... as I feel such a failure before God at times.But He is ever near... and hears and answers our every cry when we pour out our hearts to Him Amazing poem. I loved it! Very well done Lol

    • atomic-angel
      November 6
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      Thank you

      appreciate ur encouraging words, especially cuz u can relate to this @ this time in ur life. Just in ur comments u offer hope-look forward 2 readin more of ur writes


  • Samantha Mula
    November 6

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    Oh Honey,experience is the essence of God, we can only measure the truth of something once we've experienced it in full. God wont depart you, just continue to be aware of the choices you make and you'll soon see how God guides the way.No, you are most definatley not alone, and when your time is right you will break free...don't stop listening**
    Your poem reads like a dream, loved the subtle rhyme it was just enough to keep me interested!

    • atomic-angel
      November 6
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      Thank you ever the more...

      your comment is so truthful, and I appreciate the honesty. I will continue to listen, and will try 2 make better choices, this writing stuff is helping me some, cuz people like you who gently intervene are helping me to understand that I can make it in this game of life. Thanks so much, definitely look forward 2 readin ur writes as well:]

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