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Flowers

Red, blue, orange, white
flowers, soft and sweet,
Love is like a flower,
blooming,
soft,
shortlived

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  • rhondasail
    November 6

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    Yes indeed, too shortlived many times. It springs up quickly and grows tall and hardy for only a season, it seems. Then as all things do, it begins its decline within the bonds of time...I like the simplicity here. There is no apology for the loss of love only the statement of the 'facts', so to speak. I like this short write quite a lot. Peace, Rhonda