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Orgy

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~by Gregg Rowe~


Cum all ye beautiful men, that are proudly on display
Ye Homo Sapiens bodies like dancers from Broadway
Cum sweet men so might with the boys
Lithe and naked, erect with ye toy

Cum ye half-naked boys and full-clothed men
Who act so butch, but are really femmes
Cum ye skinny youths and chubby bears
Let me fuck those soft buns, if you dare

Cum beautiful men with chests as bright as gold
Lie down on the rug with me `fore ye grow old
Cum ye manhood’s, thin and long
Cum ye manhood’s, short and strong

Let me grasp those rods that are so powerful
Let me suck and slurp, tug and pull
Let me spit and eat and lick those balls
Give me one, give me all

With sturdy cocks, ye let me eat
Each and every inch of ye meat
With chests like roosters as ye cum
Fill my throat with ye jism

Lie ye head on me shoulder and kiss me teat
Someone go down and swallow me dick
White jism will lie upon me tanned lawn
Someone keep me cumming’ until dawn

Cum on strong, ye young cock fools
Shove up me belly ye long, hard tool
Suck me dick, lick me arm and chest
Lie back and sigh, I’ll do the rest

Let me cum in ye mouth, I do not fake
Let’s cum together, tremble and beg
Yes, disrobe your 501s, let’s have some fun
Let’s tangle and touch and tingle and cum

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Written April 15th, 2004

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  • ShadesXofXGray
    December 22, 2005
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    oh wow!! I really like this one.. lol I especially love the background.. not the picture ..lol the picture... well .. maybe it is just because I prefer women over men and gay men over straight..lol anyways.. wonderful job.. I have to admit I was looking forward to your peice.. and I am not disappointed..
    great job and thank you .. thank you... lol for entering..
    Love,
    Kid


  • Symphony
    December 22, 2005
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    Whoa .... *speechless*....My good god never read anything like this before ..... wow ... best of luck in the contest


  • lordoftherings gold member
    July 18, 2004
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    I'm so glad you loved it and am still smiling at yor uplifitng comment you left. Gregg


  • shastadaisey123
    May 7, 2004
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    "lets tangle and touch and tingle and cum" OMIGOSh ...splash these words across this background and wow what a combination ...love 501's adored this little piece of erotica and think you are quite brave or in need of "something"lol...I write a piece like this and because I am so "uplifting" and "pure of thought " I can never post it ...watch out someday when I get brave enough to do so lol ...okay ..I have to go read it again ...you know for literary purposes only ...freda


  • Clyde1023
    April 19, 2004
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    lol...this was so cool...the old english gave it a grand...preformance, if you will...lol...


  • Wilted Rose
    April 17, 2004
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    wehell looky here!!!!!!!!!!! this is quite a kinky poem, i quite liked it i must say!!!!!!! and i didnt mind the pic hehe but i think hes got a little bit too much muscle, id rather my riley any day!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i love my riley!!!!! lol yer anyways back to your poem hehe
    i was quite intrigued u made my blood boil with excitement
    thanks for entering
    and good luck in the contest
    i'll let you get back to your men
    Kate


  • DragonessTawnya
    April 16, 2004
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    LOL! I am not going to steal the pic(maybe because I have the one man I need, although he is away right now ). This was a great read, Gregg! Thanks for suggesting it. I could just see you having all sorts of fun, hehe. Great write. Best of luck in the contest.
    ~Tawnya~

  • lordoftherings gold member
    April 15, 2004
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    I love it...every message I received so far on this one is a variation of 'I stole your pic' and then, as an afterthought, 'I liked your poem': I'm laughing my ass off
    Edited on Apr 15, 1:21 p.m. because ''.


  • FifthDove
    April 15, 2004
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    ((I stole the pic Queen shhhhh)

    I like yer poem.


  • April 15, 2004
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    Crued and to the point

    I like the way you shame on me or shame on you but either way its all good!!!


  • barefoot contessa silver member
    April 15, 2004
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    Stares in a trance at the picture Um...great write. stares at the picture harder


  • April 15, 2004
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    nope....i prefer a swimmer's body...
    too many bumpy muscles on above specimen
    ye may have him....
    oh, you already did?
    well, have him again!
    hmmm...really...
    well then, pass him on and get another one!
    don't be greedy...
    ~liz
    (dare i admit to blushing? nooo...don't think so)
    Edited on Apr 17, 8:52 because ''.


  • NurseChilly gold member
    April 15, 2004
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    Ohh My!!! I am shocked.. NOT.. now this is erotic.. ahem lolololol okay.. the pic..I pinched.. hehehhe but whooahh steady there eddy.. you'll be getting way to excited
    ~GILL~xxx

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