by Gregg Rowe
And G-d said:
“Let us make man in our image, after our likeness:…
So G-d created man in his own image, in the image of G-d created he him…
And G-d made, apart from His Heaven,
A Garden, which was beautiful and warm as G-d himself
And seeing the beauty and feeling the warmth
G-d saw that he needed to add more Beauty
And so he created in his own image, a boy-man
And G-d added to the torso of the boy-man a huge cock
With large eggs nestled in skin below the cock
Which not only pleased him, but also pleased the boy-man
And G-d said; “It was so!”
And the boy-man played with his huge cock,
Alone, for hours and the Garden smelt of semen
From his resounding dateless delights
And there was no knowledge that he was nude
So fig tree leaves stayed hung on the trees
Instead of cum rags
And G-d saw the boy-man grow older everyday
With each masturbatory session, the boy-man matured
And continued his resounding dateless delights
And G-d watched his creation play and mangle
His huge cock, tickling his balls
And using saliva for lubrication
And G-d watched in His own delight
As the boy-man climaxed in ecstasy
Spewing his love seed all over his hairless chest
Using it as a skin moisturizer
For the boy-man did not need to work
And G-d watched as the boy-man grew
With an expanding chest and nickel sized nipples
And his manhood grew larger everyday
And G-d was pleased in His creation
And the boy-man grew fine hair all over his body
And G-d loved His human project
And G-d saw the boy-man needed a partner
During the night, G-d put a deep sleep on the boy-man
And He lifted the boy-man’s huge cock
Up into the Heavens and held it in His hands
And He felt the hardness of His creation and decided
That the boy-man needed many tunnels to aid him
With his playful pastimes
He placed the penis close to His lips
Where He closed His eyes and pressed the delicate cock head
Up to His closed lips and kissed the tip
He ran the soft skin across His face
Feeling the silky eye of the head
In His own Divine mind
He pressed the base across His tongue
Letting the young balls rest upon His chin
He opened His mouth wider and let the shaft
Slide down his Holy throat
Looking down upon the Garden he saw the boy-man
Smile in his deep sleep
And G-d liked what He saw and felt
And said: “It was so!”
Slowly He let the cock head slide in and out of His mouth
Feeling the quivering of the shaft with each thrust
He felt the large balls
Shrink in the huge sac and felt the warm seed
Tunnelling up the cock vein
And G-d prepared His throat
To receive the life of seed that He had created
After the boy-man came, G-d spit it in a golden chaise
And placed the large cock on His alter
With the seed of life he created another man in His own image
Created he him
And G-d liked what He saw and felt
And said: “It was so!”
And G-d placed the huge cock back on the torso of His boy-man
And when the boy-man awoke from his deep sleep
There was another like him lying next to him
And both boy-men began to play with their manhood’s
Tickling their own balls and their beautiful brown nipples
Spewing their liquids all over their youthful bodies
And G-d was happy with His creation
And he told the boy-men: “I created you equal to play with one another”
And so the boy-men became playmates
Where they tongued and sucked and masturbated one another
Swallowing each other’s sweet seed of life
They explored one another’s bodies
Fingertips and tongues bathing beautiful ivory skin
Turning around and washing their huge cocks
With hot tongues, sliding them into hungry throats
Like G-d had done to create them
And they innocently fucked one another, their bodies
Interlocked like jigsaw puzzle pieces
And G-d liked what He saw and felt
And said: “It was so!”
And G-d noticed the juice of life that he created,
The juice from His own eyes,
Poured unto the dusts and fruitless bushes
And emptied upon smooth torsos and down hungry throats
And he said: “They need one more tunnel”
And whilst the two were sleeping
G-d took from each a chromosome
And He made upon His alter
A figurine with larger breasts and an inverted cock
And He placed the two balls inside the torso
And He called them Yves, Steve and Eve
And when the two boy-men awoke
There was the first woman and G-d told them to go forth and multiply
And produce forth more beauty and gods and goddesses into His Garden
And the woman would be the child bearer and the two boy-men
Would show the world the unspoken love
And the woman was happy to have
Two large cocks and four balls to play with
She loved the attention that the two males ravished upon her body
She loved both men and gave them equal attention
Bathing her mouth with their large cocks
Holding their balls in her hand
And they took turns making love to that inverted cock in her body
And while Steve made love to her, she would gulp Yves’ manhood
Deep down in her throat while Steve thrust himself in her
And when it was Yves turn to pump her hole, she teased
The manhood of Steve and drank his sweet cum
And she loved to have sperm baths and free moisturizer for her skin
And the two boy-men practiced their lovemaking techniques
Soon over time, the Garden became populated
With goddesses and gods of the three in their characteristic replicas
And some men married the women
And some women stayed with women
And Steve and Yves showed the young men
The art of lovemaking
And the population knew that the women would
Feel the pain and joy of lovemaking
While the Garden became populated
Because they knew that the love of G-d
Was inside the wombs of the women
But the men that stayed together with men
Teased and licked and sucked and fucked
And became experts in cock-sucking and pleasure
And the men who married woman
Were not shy of their manhood’s
Being sucked and held and played with
By other men, erect nipples found willing mouths and fingertips
But then Eve made them eat the apple from the tree
And then all were ashamed
And the men and women who were together
Built closets in the Garden and held secret sex rendezvous
And G-d was disappointed
Because man was no longer made in His own image
Author notes
EXPLICIT SEXUAL IMAGERY: This was a dinner conversation that was attended by three straights, one bi-sexual, and two gays and we discussed what the Garden of Eden would be like if there was no such thing as a heterosexual domination in the world. It is based upon mythologies and cultures around the world before the Bible was ever written. Of course, the story opens up with the Creation of the Garden of Eden...
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Written April 15th, 2004
In a list
- Hetro-Erotic
(Adults Only Please) • next in list - Gregg's Golden Cups • next in list
- Gregg's Silver Cups • next in list
- The Honorables • next in list
A contest entry
- Gold Winners... Pre-writes Only by Nicole Hanna.
300 points, ended February 5, 2005, 1 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Express Yourself - Prewrites Allowed by Asylaarix.
450 points, ended November 27, 2006, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Give me Erotic by Swan song.
480 points, ended July 21, 2007, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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very good
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That was awesome! I love the imagery ... this was by far the most delightful poem I have ever read ... and so comical at the same time ... you really awoke the sensual spirit in me tonight boy lol ... good write and keep on writing ... your good at what you do ... hehe
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This is a brilliant piece of poetry and although the begining comes across as rather offencive to many people you bring great clarity and understanding at the end. My only concern for you is that people wont read enough to give it a chance. Great write thanks for entering blessed be alina.
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i am shocked not to see more bible banging protest in the comments here. fucking slackers.
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perfect. well, perhaps it goes on a bit long, but then we love long don't we? fucking perfect.
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What's this? I admit, yes, it's original, but I can't find myself enjoying it. Not at all.
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I can't forget this one. How many trophys has it won so far??
Any way congrads on the silver!
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Glacian: I am glad that you were able to read this a second time (especially in a contest you host) and am pleased at the award you have bestowed upon it. Yes, it does stir up quit the controversy doesn't it; which brings a smile upon my face because that is my intention...once the controversy settles then people think. And I totally agree with your Final Notes on your contest page, it probably would warrant me to be burned at the stake for what I have penned by non other than the Christians themselves who promote peace and love...ironic. Gregg
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Ahh I see you posted my IM. don't know why I didn't just leave it as a comment earlier. Yes I found this poem to be absolutely brilliant the first time I read it...I really don't know what else to say.
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Most interesting. I have neither good or bad as far as the content goes. I care not how one chooses to lead their life, as long as their choices do not affect me personally.
It is an interesting twist on Creation, as they call it.
The writing itself is well done. I did find myself surprised to see that you did not spell out G-d's name, as is the case in a religion or three. I wonder if that placated anyone?
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This is a very good poem regarding your intent of backlash at the catholic church. It is very sad that some people misunderstood it, and very sad that they are probably the Christians who unknowingly unhold evil. This was very powerful.
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jesu.. i see what you mean. ^_~; very different.
*peace*
Trish
It shouldnt be in adult though if you dont mind my saying so... very erotic and explicit, well written though.
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From: Glacian June 18, 2004
37 minutes ago
That poem "In G-d's Garden" was outstanding. I didn't think an applause would express how impressed I was with it. I mean despite it being well written, humorous, and blending erotica, and what seems to me sort of a religious satire, it delves into a philosophical issue I don't really think many people who are instantly offended by the sexual content even realize : What would the perfect life really be like? The world you portray here seems devoid of suffering, racism, sexism, of hatred or evil of any kind. Absolutely brilliant.
Admittedly, I don't critique much on this site, mostly because I find so many poems I have no interest in I give up half the time after reading 3 or 4 stinkers ( no offense to the authors, but it's hard to keep my attention when every other poem is about cutting/love/etc.) Anyway...you're probably one of the exceptions i'll make. I'll be sure to check out more of your work. -
!!! Awesome!
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All i want to know is why do ppl feel they have to apologize if they believe it to be blasphemous or pornographic or perverse?
why should someone who has every right to free speech and to disagree feel the need to apologize for his/her beliefs or opposition to such a write? though i found the poem offensive, i am prepared to read it in order to enter the worldview/life/mind of another...(though most often they wouldnt enter or entertain mine)... -
Thanks for your polite answer - Yes that is precisely the point I was am making – Pornography (explicit presentation of sexual activity in literature or films to stimulate erotic rather than aesthetic feelings) Erotica ( for the purpose of arousing sexual desire ) Both oxford dictionary definitions – I feel should not be merged with adult material but should focus purely on that form of presentation only for those that enjoy it – There was a recent contest on here that said it wanted poetry that made him masturbate. . . – I think the guy running such a contest really needs help. But I am aware that on All Poetry things won’t change. I am well aware that half the fun of writing this stuff is to shock people by not confining it. If it were confined to Erotica only then 90% of readers wouldn’t see it and the writer wouldn’t get the same excitement of being a rebel – so it is purposely merged.
Adult material in my opinion should be that material that might be upsetting for children under 14 years – subjects such as murder, rape, suicide, drug experience etc. etc. But as I say it will never happen on AP and in my experience usually those that protest only get insults and sworn at. I have even seen a contest on here by 12-year-old saying erotica acceptable but please post it as other - so she would be able to read the entries – In fact this poem was not erotic to the point of disgusting like some – I was just making a general point as I saw that others were also upset by the poem – Albert
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It is under the proper categories and they are Erotica AND Adult so there is no misleading going on here...it's been listed under these categories since it was first put up so if people fail to read categories before venturing to the poem itself, then it is their won fault but I did my precautions before posting it, as a reader do yours.
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When I read this type of poem plus the comments supporting them it is just another indication how All Poetry is on a knife-edge – but there is little point in complaining, as the monitors seem strongly in favor. It is sad when poems about God or religion generally is not suitable for children – I am not particularly against this sort of literature written specifically to shock - but I feel it should be kept in its own category – and not let loose in general ‘adult’ or ‘other’ categories – agazeley
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Spork: I am also Catholic and this was sort of my anger at the what is happening to the Church with priests and boys...it's a culmination of everything that I find hyprocritical with the Church, but at the same time it incorporates the days of Greek and Roman civilization before Christianity with their wild orgies and blessings to their gods, etc. It came out in a three-hour dinner conversation between all of us, so I thought it would be fun to sort of record it...and I didn't write it to be shocking, I am a very open-minded person and have seen Caligula at least five times in my lifetime now, which is another place these ideas were born from. Gregg
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He pressed the base across His tongue
Letting the young balls rest upon His chin
He opened His mouth wider and let the shaft
Slide down his Holy throat
Oh DAMN! This is..is...DAMN! Its oh so twisted and shocking and blasphemous and PERVERSE!! I included erotica in my contest because I wanted to be all inclusive but I really didn’t think I would get anything like this, what a surprise! This is such a powerful poem, I love it even as I find myself slightly offended. Its not your fault though, just the residual affect of my catholic upbringing. Just the thought of G-d giving a blowjob is staggering. I can’t even explain all the things this poem makes me feel, I think you’ve warped my mind. I did ask for powerful poetry so this defiantly fits the bill...A truely stunning spectacular write.
I would applaude you if I didnt fear going to hell for it.
Thanks for entering my contest!
spork
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wow, this was... very interesting...
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I can find nothing offensive in this poem. I hope you realised that this was posted in the Adult and Erotica section and a piece like this is more than well placed there. May I ask what you found so offensive??
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Well I found it to be totally offensive. It sickened me and I could not even read all of the filthy poem (a term I use lightly because I do not see where it is any kind of poem.) Please do not IM me either. If you only want someone to comment who is going to stroke your ego, then you should not post it. Melody
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Well you certainly have a way with words. This form of writing has always been my fatal damnation and I enjoyed your story very much. I deliver this comment under my pen because I myself am a hypocrite and a liar. I am human and drawn to sensual pleasures.
Very well written indeed.
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Well, first I'd like to say congrats on the trophies this has won, however, I'm not a fan of it myself. I don't know why, but it just rubbed me the wrong way. I'm not a deeply religious person, but I think I was offended with the creation of the second boy-man. I'm a hypocrite and I know it.
Having said that, I also know (and you obviously do too) that you cannot please everyone all the time, so please don't take it personally as I love your other works. 
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You are so right when you said that I received a lot of flack over it, some of them complained to moderators and asked me to remove it but I refused and another website deleted it without my knowledge. I am so glad you can see behind the write itself and that alone makes me content with the writing!
Gregg
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I loved this one. It's very original and erotic. Also, it held my attention until the last word. The imagery is some of the best I've ever read on here. I'm sure a lot of people have probably given you a hard time over this one, but screw them. LOL. I like it. Thanks for entering my contest. Good luck.
~Miranda
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What an amazing piece...fantasticly original idea with perfect imagery! Thank you for sharing this great write!
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lovely
THIS IS DEFINATLY THE TRUE STORY..at least it should be...very very well writen..i love it...i was consumed in the writing and the way it flowed...just perfect....
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Thank you Sam for the trophy and encouraging words, you don't know how much flack I receive over this piece of creativity, so I am proud that you felt it was good enough for a trophy! (I think I got it in just before you closed your contest
in the nick of time).
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This was the last one entered and the last one I read. This was so good..I really really enjoyed reading it and thank you so much for entering! it was an awesome piece!
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WOW.. this is awesome.. I love it.. it's pretty damn funny in my opinion.. and fuck we are all going to hell if we are not already there! awesome awesome write and best of luck int he contest!
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Very very nice
I absolutely love this, and I love how brave you are with your writing. I'm bisexual myself. Love the imagery you used. I've read many of your poems and have yet to comment but I've loved everything I've read of yours. Wonderful Job -
hahahahaha i love it its the best version of adam n ever ive ever heard!!!!!!!!!!!!!! CONGRATULATIONS!!!!!!!!!!! it fucking rocks!!!!!
oh who cares wat other ppl think, let em be stupid homophobes n religious dickheads if they want to but where's the fun in their lives? lol
i love it its mad
thanks for entering the contest
it was well worth the read!
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Ah, this is good. This is VERY good. Sometimes people need a little jolt, hehe. Hopefully, you gave them one with this. I love it.
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I hope you win.
It was a fantasy indeed.
It was a perfect world.
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well al'b damned..... I applaud your bravery and your sense of humor... (And thank god you added a female, I was starting to get bored!)
actually that's far from the truth - it was good, before Eve came into the picture - but got better
I personally believe "writing" has endless opportunities and possibilities - and it's obvious you try to explore them all. That's a great quality. I also think "my" god, has a sense of humor and apparently a tendency to be "horny" or else why would he want us all to have children in his name lol and have the ability to orgasm??? right? Great write!
and... P.S. amaaaaazing picture.......
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